In Progress Critique:
The first and third photographs I found cool right away because I couldn't tell exactly what they were the first time I looked. I like the way the first has the darkness coming up at the edges. The third one also has a lot of contrast with the shadows and texture. I almost wonder if you could darken the shadows and lighten the other areas a bit. Either way it looks sweet.
In the second photo I like the position of each of the M&Ms because it kind of draws the eye more towards them. There is a slightly yellowed part of the picture in the top left corner that draws away some of the focus. If you like, that could probably be toned down in photoshop. (I've used just the paintbrush to paint over things when the background is a solid color like this one). I also like how the shadows and darker areas around the M&Ms makes it look like there is depth.
Finally, I'll tell you I like the colors in the two paper sculpture pictures. Because it is just one color standing out, it adds emphasis. The shadow of the sculpture in the last picture creates a kind of rhythm in that it directs the eye as you look at it.
Hope this helps!
All around awesome photographs!
I love the first and third pictures, because it gives a feeling of depth and contrast. I also like the fifth one, because it seems that the paper sculpture is in mid air, and the contrast of the red and black is very nice.
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Kenzie Martin
1/12/2015 01:20:46 am
I really like the fifth picture (paper sculpture) because the black background makes the sculpture really stand out and pop. The black gives it depth and makes it look really cool.
I also really like the first picture because it just honestly looks really sweet.
The third and fourth photos are hard to determine what they are or what's going but overall nice photos!